MIGRAIN assessment 1 - learner response
1) Type up your feedback in full.
WWW:
- Good first assessment
- Could have been a grade higher if not for Q2 being incomplete
- Brilliant start
EBI:
- Q2: Needs to cover both texts
- More theory in Q3
- Q1: Excellent analysis of the product that is detailed and critically engages with the nuanced aspects of how narrative codes are used.
- Q2: Excellent knowledge and understanding of the influences of the social and cultural contexts on media products that is consistently supported by highly appropriate and effective reference to the set products (ONLY REALLY APPLIES TO III MANORS).
- Q3: Consistent highly appropriate use of subject specific terminology throughout. (ESPECIALLY SINCE I DID NOT REFER BACK TO THEORIES)
- Urban environment in III Manors
- White male in working class environment challenging Figure 1 - placed in working class environment like the boy in the Nike ad
- Reference to lighting
- Reference to Abercrombie's theory
- Talking about why genre is also important to audiences
4) Did you get any media terminology or theory wrong in the assessment? Make a note of it here for future revision, including theories/terminology that you could have used but didn't.
My references to the environment for III Manors was wrong instead of being a apocalyptic/dystopian setting it's actually urban.
Referring to the man in III Manors as a 'Hero' as well as a 'Princess@ when he is only a hero.
5) Identify your weakest question and write three bullet points that would improve on your original response. Use the mark scheme and exemplar paper to identify these points - particularly focusing on the anticipated content and the top level descriptors.
I think I have a weakness in fully grasping onto new texts in the exam under exam conditions because the difference in my confidence on writing about the Nike ad compared to III Manors is quite clear.
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